It was raining outside, each drop falling with a
resonating sound, creating the immortal smell of
soil. The drops would fall and spread as dancing
ripples. The whole flow was predefined and
beautiful beyond consciousness.
Standing on the edge of porch all my thoughts
could assimilate is the memory of a similar
evening, a evening which had one exception to it.
I was not alone. Her presence made all the
ambiance and the horizon more convincing, more
desirable and I embraced them all. The whole new
feeling was blessed with her mesmerizing smell,
the sharp touch and the glittering beauty.
The whole new world seemed to be recreated at the
marvelous stroke of the artist who created.
The whole theme of life was revived with the thought of her presence. Thats the only difference between the rainy evening then and now. Thats the only difference.
Truly
Abinash
6 comments:
yes thats all the difference is all about :)
You know what i like most about your blogs..the 'words' you use.
You pickup words so appropriately that each of them say something and adds beauty to the post.
But too be honest,sometimes after pondering for a long time also, I am not able to figure out the meaning of few phrases. Next time, I will point them out !!
Whatever,this post is another great work. Well done !!
Lakshmi: Yeah the difference is all about that. :)
Mudit: Thanks yaar. :) Yeah please do point them out I will be glad. Sometimes I end up writing things too abstruse which ideally I should not. :)
Your writings are not abstruse. But reader may not be having the same perception and emotion with which u wrote. Everyone has its own interpretation. This is the only difference. It has nothing to do with your style of writing.
Yeah sometimes the presence and the difference of someone does make a great difference.
Yeah sometimes the presence and the difference of someone does make a great difference.
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